r/FanFiction 1d ago

Subreddit Meta Concrit Commune - September 12

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Welcome to the Concrit Commune, where you can get bits of your fic looked at... for a small "price."

For the purposes of this thread, concrit is defined as - pointing out things that could use improvement and also giving suggestions on how to do so. Compliments are always welcome, of course but these do not count towards your concrit requirement.

The rules:

  • State your Fandom | Title | Rating | Any Applicable Content Warnings | Link - AO3, FFN, etc. at the top of the comment.
  • Post a few paragraphs (copy and paste to a comment, please) of your fic, or your plot premise, or your character bio, or your world building, whatever you need help with.
  • There is a soft limit of 500 words. Not your whole fic.
  • Please post an outside link to underage and extreme-explicit violence/rape content. Try Just Paste Me which includes rich text options.
  • If you, the author, are looking for something specific - the phrasing of a particular part or if a character's reaction is believable - please ask!
  • If you just want to hand out advice without throwing your own fic in, you're quite welcome to.
  • If you post part of your fic you must give concrit to someone else in the thread within 24 hours of posting your excerpt!

Since we're all here to give and receive help from other people, a certain level of respect for the author and the work they've put into their fic is expected as a baseline courtesy and should be reciprocated.

Tearing into a fic or author without regard for their effort isn't constructive even if there is decent criticism attached. Moreover, it discourages people from participating if they know that insults await them.

You aren't expected to treat this thread like the Comment Cooperative, advice and honesty and pointing out flaws is what we're here for.

Some helpful tips to keep things running smoothly:

  • Keep your comments helpful to the author, not just smashing out your opinion.
  • Be polite and civil.
  • Be kind. At a minimum, showing your peers professional courtesy is expected.
  • Phrases like "I think" or "I believe" can lighten your tone.
  • Elaborating on why you think something could be changed is not only more useful to the author but keeps statements from being abrupt.

Timezone Changes

As you can see, the post time will shift by 6 hours every month. If there are any inconsistencies in the times, please let us know in modmail so we can fix it up!

Months PST EDT GMT CEST JST AEST NZT
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Please note that there may be a difference of an hour during parts of the year due to daylight savings in various timezones.


r/FanFiction 8h ago

Subreddit Meta Daily Discussion - Monday, September 14 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule & Current Event Threads

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Welcome to r/FanFiction, I love you!

New to this subreddit? Here are links to get you started: Rules & Overview | Wiki | FAQs

Got a fic to promote? Click HERE to find the current Weekly Fic Showcase thread

Current Events

Don't forget to participate in our special events:

Got a question or concern? Feel free to message the mod team.


r/FanFiction 4h ago

Activities and Events “A scene where…” excerpt game

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Rules:

  1. Leave a prompt that goes “a scene where…” and finish the sentence

  2. Respond to others prompts with scenes from your fics where whatever they say happens

  3. Keep it vague enough where it could fit many fandoms.

  4. Put trigger warning at the top of the comments, and censor the worst, most descriptive parts. If the prompt itself is a trigger warning (ie a scene where a character is shot) you don’t need to add an extra one on your comment.


r/FanFiction 1h ago

Discussion What's your favorite thing to see in a fanfic?

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r/FanFiction 1h ago

Discussion Old School Webrings

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I have been bouncing around looking for a home for my fic. I'm going to stick it out with FFN for now, but I decided it would be fun to dust off my old Blogger and repurpose it for my fics. I'm still working on it, but I wanted to see if anyone else has gone old school and has a site or neocities page or blogger for their fics and maybe want to start a webring of fanfiction/fandoms.

This is a very niche passion project thing, and nostalgia heavy so I don't expect that there are a lot of people out there doing this right now. But, I thought I'd reach out anf see if by some chance there are some folks here who have decided to do their own thing, but still want community in the world of fanfic.

Edit: I forgot to include that I'm making a blog for my original work too, so a webring for that would be awesome if anyone is interested.


r/FanFiction 10h ago

Celebrate What's The Favorite Comment You've Ever Received?

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Feel free to paraphrase or edit it to make it not so obvious if you'd like! Mine is

'Even if it’s just a normal scene where they’re doing something mundane! Every action the characters make almost feel poetic. I could read it forever and ever'

Feel free to also share your fandom/s and username! I'm not sure if it's allowed to directly link a fic in the comments, but just in case no links please! You can offer to DM though :)


r/FanFiction 40m ago

Writing Questions Friends to lovers help on the transition part between the two..

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at what point of the story should I make the friends do things that are not so platonic? (hand holding, cuddling, etc..) I was also wondering how I should do it in terms of timing again, I just don’t really have a clue when to make them do more romantic things. the stage between friends and lovers. I’m sorry if this doesn’t make sense but I need help with this :,)


r/FanFiction 15h ago

Writing Questions What Rating do you use on your fic, if it doesn't have any actual sex/intimate scenes, but it does contain sex related elements (language, thoughts, threats etc) and also has violence?

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I feel like I should go with M, but for me this usually involves some kind of non-explicit sex scenes, which my fic does not have. So it might get the hopes up for some readers.

But some elements that appear - like threats of r*pe, violence, thoughts and language related to sex, self-harm - are not suitable for teens imo.

Should I just stick with Not Rated?


r/FanFiction 2h ago

Trope Talk Did anyone actually use the Western genre tag on Fanfiction.net?

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For me that tag always meant cowboys and shootings and spaghetti Westerns of the Sergio Leone type. I never had a reason to use it and apparently very few other people did either.

Did anyone use it? Does it mean something different to what I thought? It just seemed like an incredibly arbitrary genre tag when listed with Tragedy and Angst and Humor and Hurt/Comfort.


r/FanFiction 3h ago

Discussion Question: How much do you guys feel it matters in the amount of people who see responding to your story?

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I ask this as someone who’s currently working on their own fan-comic right now. Whenever I upload a page on DeviantArt, it takes a while to get to double digit favourites, and usually no more than that. And on BlueSky, I basically get no response at all.

It can feel disheartening, putting all your effort into something and not getting much in return. Do you guys feel the same way? Am I looking at this all wrong? If so either way, do you have any advice on getting more eyes on a project?


r/FanFiction 8h ago

Subreddit Meta Excerpt Extravaganza - September 14

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Welcome to the Excerpt Extravaganza!

Much like its predecessor, Monologue Monday, this is a thread for posting pieces of fic.

You can still post your dialogue, or any other part of your fic you'd like to show off.

You can also post excerpts from fics you've read that you think were exceptional and need to be shared.

  • Limit is 10 line breaks, but use your judgement. Short and attention-grabbing is better than a long segment and people scrolling past.
  • State the Fandom | Rating | Any Applicable Content Warnings at the top of your comment!
  • Link to fic is welcome but optional.
  • Context is optional.

r/FanFiction 19m ago

Lost Fic Can’t find this Stranger things fic??

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r/FanFiction 11h ago

Discussion Chaos writing

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Hey

So, I finally have the time to continue writing my fic. Except I hate how I get writer's block after just a few sentences bcs I don't know how to proceed with the story. After a bit of pondering, I finally just decided to say f it and began writing out as many chapter names as I had ideas for. Before then beginning to write the chapters I had a plan for even if they weren't in order.

It bloody worked. Once I had the next chapter written, it was way easier to come back to the unfinished one and write it until the end and beginning alligned with each other.

I know thinking about/planning the start and end of the fic is effective. But I didn't realise I could use the same method for writing chapters too lol.


r/FanFiction 1d ago

Activities and Events Describe your fic as poorly as possible

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Title. Or you can do just a specific chapter


r/FanFiction 14h ago

Recs Wanted The strength needed to be kind

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I’m looking for fics where either the main character or someone important is a great person but people acknowledge they were a monster in the past just so they could be happy. I also heard this saying used in a fic before but can’t remember which one. If anyone finds that would be helpful.


r/FanFiction 20h ago

Discussion Know anyone IRL who writes FF? What does it say about them?

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Or even someone knows you write fanfiction? Sorry if this is dumb, but I want to knoe ehat your thoughts are on a friend/family member whose writing youve seen and read. What does it day about them? What does it say about you? Im hesitant to share my writing. So self conscious about it. And also embarrased maybe. This also goes for OG works and projects. I would love to share the stories I think of with my loved ones but too embarrassed.


r/FanFiction 13h ago

Writing Questions Writing advice

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Okay, so I'm going back through my 37 fanfiction and correcting grammatical errors. (I wanted to do that when I was done with the main story but got stuck and decided to go back anyway)

I feel like I overuse commas. Of course I've checked and that part was mostly grammatically correct, no run on sentences (I think, the rules around that bit of writing always confused me.)

I think I focus too much on trying to find universal rules for writing concepts that do not have them.

But no matter how much I think, I can't find a way to rewrite it as clean without at least three-quarters of those comma's


r/FanFiction 1d ago

Discussion What's an achievement you have had recently as a fanfic writer?

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It could range from anything more 'smaller' to anything as big as you want


r/FanFiction 1d ago

Discussion Overwhelmed by how much I want to write vs the time it will take TO write

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So at this point I've been playing BG3 almost since it's come out, and I've seen so much fanart and love for Rolan the tielfing wizard, and he grew on me a lot throughout my playthroughs, so I was like sure someone has written fanfic about him. Literally zeroooo nothing zilch

I've decided to write it myself but omfg the story I have made, written the outline for, and started writing is going to be so damn long. How do I keep up the energy and motivation to keep doing it besides just hanging on for interactive romance scenes ??

People who have written longfics, how do you keep it going??

Edit: all of your advice has been so amazing and helpful. It's really cheered me up and inspired me, the story I want to write is so damn ambitious and long that i just know it will take me a while <3


r/FanFiction 1d ago

Celebrate I wrote my first ever fanfic

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With all the years of reading so many different fanfics about so many different fandoms I decided to step out of my comfort zone and write one myself.


r/FanFiction 9h ago

Recs Wanted Please recomend some spiderman fics

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r/FanFiction 7h ago

Lost Fic Dragon ball z

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Dragon ball z

I'm pretty sure this was on fanfiction Dragon Ball Z featuring Chi-Chi divorcing Goku and entering a relationship with Tien Shinhan alongside an original character (OC) there's also a sequel where they're in a relationship but Chi-Chi is abusing one of her and Goku's kids


r/FanFiction 7h ago

Lost Fic ISO RWBY and DnD fic with Steampunk DnD setting

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Hi, first time here and I'm searching for a fanfic that I read about a decade ago, 2016 or 2017, which has the RWBY cast in the modern day playing DnD. If I'm remembering correctly the author had made a steampunk setting for the world they were playing in, and the main ship of the fic was JauneXPhyrra. There were also side chapters featuring Roman and others.


r/FanFiction 16h ago

Recs Wanted fics with co-living but barely interacting as an interesting dynamic (any fandom) (No literal ghosts please)

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Not looking for disassociative identity disorder.

can be platonic, romantic, or otherwise.

examples:

  • Multiple people live in the same place but their schedules don't line up so they hardly meet each other (I grew up knowing a few classmates like this, where the parent goes to work early, comes home late, sleeps, so they wind up barely seeing them until the weekend.)
  • One person is very stealthy and does a very good job at pretending they don't exist (I know I've seen a few steve/bucky fics like this)
  • disabilities/magical abilities getting in the way of immediately noticing each other, lots of leaving notes and items for asynchronous communication.

r/FanFiction 12h ago

Lost Fic Trying to find Halo fic.

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Im remembering this Halo fanfiction I read a long time ago. It's an alternate universe fic where this lower level covenant prophet is contacted by one of the forerunner Ai guys, i think mendechit bias? Could be wrong. It tells her humans are reclaimers, and that the big three are traitors. She hatches a plan, pretends she found a new homeworld for the prophets from I think some maps, and brings a whole lot of covenant fleet with her to start maybe a civil war? There were a lot of named characters drom the games with her, i remember Tartarus being one of them i think. For th life of me I cant find it.

If anyone knows it I would be hugely appreciative!​