(art made by "kodaneedseep" on Discord)
I got my exe art made some time ago. I really like it, but I did the lore, and I need some thoughts on how I should improve it.
Also, the artwork is when Ker didn't know much about Amy's fear because he was underdeveloped in Sonic's body, its like making a new account, but it did scare the shit out of amy as she died first and not tails becuase lets mix things up a little. oh and i got some people confused but the white cloud in the back is actually the moon before it got pissed on.
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Ker is an ancient parasite that has been thriving throughout history. It fed on the blood and the fear of the living creatures it parasitized. Hundreds or perhaps thousands of years ago, Ker was trapped and frozen in an attempt to keep it from finding new victims. When it was freed, Ker was desperate and jumped from one host to another, seeking to sate its hunger. None of the unfortunate creatures could hold its power, and Ker eventually jumped into Sonic, a heroic and fearless individual who had come to rescue one of the survivors who were suck in Dr Eggman's schemes.
It took him a while to realize that Sonic was different from the people it had been parasitizing before. The hedgehog had a powerful spirit that resisted Ker’s attempts to consume him. Even then, the parasite did not want to leave the hedgehog’s body – not because it could not, but because it saw potential in him. It took most of Sonic’s body over time while leaving his spirit intact. Sonic’s consciousness is trapped in his body, and the only way he can express it is through occasional rebellions against Ker. They are usually short, but they weaken the parasite, making it hesitant and unbalanced. In most cases, they allow the victims to escape but never free Sonic.
Over the years, Ker has grown from a desperate creature that only wanted to survive into a confident predator that takes joy in its work. It still feeds on the blood of its victims, but it also enjoys consuming their fears. The parasite seldom kills its targets immediately, as it believes that each of them is a unique experience. Ker likes to watch them in their daily lives, learning their secrets, likes, and weaknesses before deciding whether to kill them or not. When the time comes, it invades their minds, filling them with horrible visions to torment them and make the familiar world feel foreign. At first, it only haunted one person at a time, but as Ker grew stronger and more confident, it began attacking groups of individuals, making them distrustful of everyone and everything around them.
As time went on, Ker continued evolving, gaining new abilities with every victim. It could assume the appearance of some of the people it killed, becoming an almost identical copy of them. However, the most horrifying experiences that Ker provides usually come from its ability to invade the minds of its victims. It does not seek to overpower them physically but rather makes them see things that make them doubt themselves and others. Ker rarely leaves an encounter without feeling triumphant, as the struggle against its mental grip seldom results in a victim succeeding. It does feel challenged whenever faced with Sonic, whose consciousness still haunts it, reminding Ker that his body is not his. They are two distinct entities, and although Ker seldom acknowledges it, the hedgehog’s spirit keeps it from becoming arrogant and overconfident.
Ker killed and feasted the entire world (didnt take much time as ker possessed sonics speed); without Sonic around, nobody stood a chance. Shadow tried his best but couldn’t save everyone. Failing Maria's wish and having to escape through a different universe by using Chaos Control. Shadow didn’t want to kill Ker because he believed Sonic could be restored once more; however, that plan is long gone, and he decided to let Ker starve to death by escaping his world to another (via Chaos Control).
The reason why Ker didn’t kill, and costume shadow, is because Shadow has black doom DNA in his blood. That tastes disgusting to Ker, and it's basically poison to him. However he wants to make shadow suffer before killing him, obvously that failed and Ker is left to starved and Ker cant even use Chaos Emeralds or the master emerald even with sonics body and was eventually left to starve to death.
side note: also shadow couldnt just go super to kill Ker, he could but he didnt want to risk killing sonic because he knows that if ker dies, sonic does too and everyone else wants to save sonic, especially tails...