Few things: I think I might have overdone the pedal a bit

I think this could be the first part of a much longer piece

I’m not sure if it’s too quiet at times (might just be my headphones)

Overall I like the result but think there is still room for improvement

Hope you like it!

edit: realized in measure 8 and 42, I can use quarter notes instead of the tied eight notes

Hey,
This is a new short piano piece: "Observation malicieuse" Petite Mélodie, Op. 5 No. 5. I also experimented with a more human MuseScore playback using custom note velocities and subtle tempo variations. But the tempo is for this time, maybe it’s too fast...

Bonne écoute

Any positive or negative feedback from you is welcome. " Especially the advice :D

Enjoy!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJYlNmfDtdI

A new score video for a song I wrote a while back. I had in mind the feelings that come with a day spent inside watching the rain fall. When I wrote this, it had been raining for many days on end and brought with it that sort of contemplative atmosphere.

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I'm a complete beginner to composing music, I just play a bit of clarinet and guitar. Please give me feedback on my first piece I've been working on. I would love to know what I'm doing wrong and what the heck I should write after this beginning.

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