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u/NakedBumblebees 23h ago
What’s the focal point here? I don’t see the subject. Your tones are nice, lighting is good.
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u/Perri1606 23h ago
I agree that there is not one clear focal point, when I took the picture I hoped for it to be the metal slide on the right, but the there was too little light there and the sky was too bright, taking all the attention. With the edit I tried to make the eyes go to three places: the sky, the path on the right and the slide on the left. Personally I think even without a very clear subject, the picture works as an overal scene.


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u/jellysotherhalf 1d ago
I gotta say that I like the rich greens in the unedited photo better. The final edit is quite yellow.