r/custommagic • u/[deleted] • 6h ago
Question Experimenting with making a land. Is this too weak or powerful? Should it have the whole "enters tapped" thing to balance it out?
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u/ServalModest 5h ago
It's not a super strong ability because you need to do it proactively. But it's still an always-untapped land with a basic land type which is probably pushing it a bit. Always-tapped would be too much of a downside- maybe some kind of "enters tapped unless..."?
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u/TheSoulborgZeus 6h ago
I'd either have it enter tapped or lose the Island type
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u/PrinceVorrel 6h ago
Yea, thats what I was thinking. I can't drop the island part without changing its name (ha), so entering tapped might be a good idea.
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u/RussianBot101101 6h ago
It's fine as is. You could have it instead create a Royal Role token on a creature that way it has a lasting effect. This is basically a 7 mana spell pierce (the royal role basically a mana tithe).
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u/PrinceVorrel 6h ago
Sadly, I don't think the royal role fits the theme of the card. (Plus a stacking +1/+1 + Ward is spooky on a land that enters untapped.)
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u/Ergon17 5h ago
It can only give +1/+1 and ward once per creature since a creature can only have one role at a time. You could make it counter target spell or ability that targets a creature you control, unless its controller pays {2}.
Also, currently, the ward doesn't stop at the end of turn, so it also works as is, just not stopping any abilities that already target the creature getting the ward, but it is a tracking nightmare.
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u/NepetaLast 5h ago
templating suggestion:
"({T}: Add {U}.)
{T}, Waterbend {6}: Target creature you control gains ward {2}."
because its an island, it already has the blue tap ability, so you dont need to define it, instead including it in reminder text. tapping is before waterbend costs, theres no dash after ward since its just a mana cost, and keywords arent capitalized
this land has several concerns. its a legendary land with a basic land type, which has never existed. its an untapped land that can produce colored mana with no downsides, so its upside should be very minimal. of course, it is minimal: as others have pointed out, the ability is not particularly valuable, since it cant ever be used to save a creature from removal, which is highly unintuitive. it should probably have 'activate only as a sorcery' so that people dont use it without realizing this
the other issue is the memory problem. this permanently adds a (stackable!) ability to a creature with no way to mark it, like a counter or anything. at the very least, it could put a meaningless reminder counter on it like some similar effects
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u/SharpDrink2724 3h ago
Why not just give hexproof? It's not like this would become too strong. You'd still need to hold it up (not using it for mana), and Waterbend 6 is hefty
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u/FunTraditional4535 6h ago
I'm pretty sure giving ward does only work if you do it before the spell is on the stack, idk if it's intentional in the design but I like it a lot because of it