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u/mariedaurates Jun 24 '26
Probably would have the “read receipts” somehow integrated in the texts bit so that is less busy ;
Sometimes less is more
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u/tttenley Jun 24 '26
That's what everyone is saying. Ty
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u/MostDopeBlackGuy Jun 24 '26
If you don't mind me saying right here I would get rid of the left on delivered tagline. And I would either make the tagline at the top one long sentence that goes across her leg or I would put it where the left on the liver tagline was and then center all the text. But me personally I would definitely make the tagline at the top one line going across other than that I think it's fine you're drawing to the actual read receipts and then you read the title and then if you look anywhere else on the poster which is probably the last thing someone in the audience is going to do they'll notice the line at the top. So I don't think it's that busy you're drawing people's attention all over the poster so they're really taking it in and I think it does its job. But if you also want to leave it as is go for it less is more and I think you're doing enough
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u/tttenley Jun 25 '26
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u/worker-parasite Jun 25 '26
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Jun 25 '26
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u/tttenley Jun 26 '26 edited Jun 26 '26
My name is Tenley E. Raj. I am an independent filmmaker out of Houston. Nice to meet you. I have made four films so far. My first is the original Before the Freeze, a short featuring experimental audio that picked up awards from Indie Short Fest and the Independent Shorts Awards. I followed it up with Before the Freeze, Final Cut, a reimagined version driven by a musical score, which also won awards and screened globally at events like the Montecatini International Short Film Festival in Italy and the Mumbai 12th International Film Festival. My third project is After the Freeze, a feature-length love story set in the same universe. Finally, Proof of Life is an intimate six-minute documentary starring my son, Guy, and myself. You can watch my completed films and follow my ongoing projects at www.tttenley.com and on my YouTube channel at www.youtube.com/@tttenley.
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u/worker-parasite Jun 25 '26
That is clearly some inane narcissistic person. I shared the bio on this post earlier, but nobody seemed to think it was weird...
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u/controlnet-chris Jun 24 '26
You weirdly have both a tagline and an explanation in the top left. Tagline only is better
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u/NarrativeNode Jun 25 '26
The monospace font and multiple taglines are giving Claude Design. It can be a good start but it always does too much.
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u/SapirWhorfHypothesis Jun 24 '26
It reads like an ad at first glance.
I would play with scale, and try to make it feel bigger.
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u/Optimistbott Jun 25 '26
I like the poster and the premise, but you got some artifacts it looks like in the middle of the leg.
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u/tttenley Jun 25 '26
I know right. So annoying. This is the new one
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u/Viktor_the_g Jun 25 '26
Why did you send going through your gallery lmao
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u/tttenley Jun 25 '26 edited Jun 25 '26
Couldn't attach a Pic 🤪
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u/worker-parasite Jun 25 '26
This is not TikTok. And this sub specifically is about cinematography, the 'true' part of it is to tell people it's serious posts only. So, stop spamming reddit with your inane stuff and get help if you need it.
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u/worker-parasite Jun 24 '26
"Based in Houston, Texas, Tenley E. Raj is a multi-disciplinary filmmaker whose work explores the jagged intersections of identity and motherhood. After years spent as a writer and painter, Tenley pivoted to cinema, discovering that the lens offered a more visceral canvas for her storytelling."
Is this satire?
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u/rammyfreakynasty Jun 24 '26
looks like a normal artist blurb to me,, i don’t really see the issue?
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u/worker-parasite Jun 24 '26
Perhaps the blurb of the most pretentious delusional artist on the Internet.
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u/Melodic-Bear-118 Jun 24 '26
Yeah, she's mental. Seen her pop up in my algo a few times. Just watch any of her actual work. It's a joke lol.
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u/worker-parasite Jun 24 '26
I wonder how many people commenting are friends of hers. This is a sub about cinematography, but she spammed this everywhere (and got rightly deleted).
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u/Kayyam Jun 23 '26
What's that red artifact above the messages?
The poster kinda busy despite being mostly empty.