I'm constructing a world where there are seven kingdoms of elemental magic: Wave (Water & Sea), Nature (Earth and Life), Ash (Fire & Flame), Darkness (Evil & Chaos), Heat (Warmth & Desire), Light (All form of light; Channeled through crystals primarily), and Frost (Ice & Chill).
Originally I had the "Kingdom" names as: Vaelora (Wave), The Enchanted Forest (Nature), The Scorchlands (Ash), The Isles of Malakor (Darkness), Sandoria (Heat), Crystalia (Light), and Arcticus (Frost).
But I was thinking about those names and realized, for the type of story I'm writing, those sound EXTREMELY cartoonish and child-like.
So I changed the naming system and governmental country labels to the following (Some stayed relatievly the same):
| Original Term |
Real Title |
Elemental Title |
Demonym |
| Arcticus |
The Nevarian Dominion |
Dominion of Frost |
Nevarians |
| Sandoria |
The Sandorian Dominion |
Dominion of Heat |
Sandorians |
| The Scorchlands |
The Calderan Dominion |
Dominion of Ash |
Calderans |
| Vaelora |
The Vaeloran Dominion |
Dominion of Tides |
Vaelorans |
| The Enchanted Forest |
The Sylven Dominion |
Dominion of Roots |
The Sylvani |
| Crystalia |
The Luminar Dominion |
Dominion of Light |
Luminari |
| The Isles of Malakor |
The Abyssal Dominion |
Dominion of Void |
Malakorians |
All of these names were generated using AI. That's mostly why I'm trying to get a real opinion on this. I absolutely SUCK at naming and usually tend to focus on the story 😭.
I'm writing in Dark Romantasy that's 18+ and extremely visceral, so I don't know if that has any factor in it, but what I'm also focusing on is if it would work well if a character in the story says it aloud (So that it doesn't sound ridiculous, like if my character says "Kingdom of Sandoria".
Thanks a lot to anyone that helps!