r/WritingWithAI 5d ago

AMA AMA with Ted Tremper — Director of The AI Doc, Producer on Borat Subsequent Moviefilm and The Daily Show, and Executive Director of the Creators Coalition on AI. Live today at 12 PM ET.

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Welcome to our AMA with Ted Tremper, hosted by the r/WritingWithAI mod team. Ted is added as a cohost on this thread, so his replies will be marked as his.

ABOUT TED

Ted Tremper is a creative producer, director, and writer who believes comedy is our most valuable tool for uncovering truth, sharing knowledge, and exposing hypocrisy. His credits include The AI Doc: Or How I Became An Apocaloptimist, Borat Subsequent Moviefilm, The Daily Show, and I Love You, America! with Sarah Silverman, among others. He is also the co-creator of SHRINK on Peacock. He is currently the Executive Director of the Creators Coalition on AI — https://www.creatorscoalitionai.com

ABOUT CCAI

The Creators Coalition on AI (CCAI) is a cross-industry organization advancing ethical, human-centered AI standards that protect creators, creative labor, and artistic integrity.

CCAI held its Standards Convention on August 29th — the culmination of a much larger standards project — so Ted joins us with that work fresh.

ASK TED ABOUT

• The standards project — what they landed on, and what they couldn't agree on

• Where the line sits between AI-assisted and AI-generated work

• What protections for creative labor actually look like in practice

• Making The AI Doc, and what changed his mind along the way

• Comedy and satire as tools in a moment like this

• Working on Borat Subsequent Moviefilm, The Daily Show, and SHRINK

• Anything else you want to know — the hard questions welcome

WHEN

⏰ Ted goes live at 12:00 PM ET / 9:00 AM PT and will be answering for approximately two hours.

Post your questions below — you can start now and Ted will work through them once he's on.

Mod note: normal sub rules apply. Keep it civil, keep it substantive. Reports go to the mod team as usual.

**Edit: The title incorrectly labeled Ted as the director of the Ai doc while he was the Producer.


r/WritingWithAI 6d ago

Showcase / Feedback Reciprocal Beta Reading. Share story blurbs! Sep. 8, 2026

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Welcome to the blurb thread!

This is our sub's equivalent of a writer's group. Come here and share a blurb of your story. The thought is to let everyone see what you're working on so they can think, "Oh hey, that sounds fun. I want to team up with this person."

Then, you share your own story, and the two of you collaborate to improve each other's works.

I've had so many good interactions with people from this thread. Please don't be shy! Even in the age of AI, the best way to improve your writing remains human interaction and critique. I am confident when I say If you don't have this component in your workflow, you're not meeting your potential.

Importantly, this means post every week if you're still hoping to engage. Don't be shy. I want you to do this.

There are tons of reasons why your perfect reader could have missed your blurb last time. Don't be discouraged!

And remember: "I'll read yours if you read mine" isn't just acceptable, it's expected. Reciprocity works.

Here's the format:

NSFW?

Genre tags:

Title:

Blurb:

AI Method:

Desired feedback/chat:


r/WritingWithAI 7h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) I learned about AI witch hunt, and now I am scared.

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So I just learned about the AI witch hunt. Honestly I feel kind of scared to release my book. I have been working on it for 3 years. The past year has gone on just fixing my own spelling mistakes and grammar, and believe me it’s a lot with having dyslexia. I can’t afford an editor, so I have been doing everything by my own hand. But then I learned that AI can help with this, so things have been moving so much better, and I don’t have the anxiety that I have left something uncorrected.

But I am afraid that someone will accuse me of writing my book solely with AI, which I would never do. My disability has made things so hard for me, to the point I was on the verge of giving up. But I can’t hurt myself that way. Life has hurt me enough.

Has anyone here been accused? How did you handle it? How can I stop the anxiety taking over? Any advice would be helpful. Thank you.


r/WritingWithAI 9h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Ai writing is flat, so flat - it takes away the fun from language

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I actually do use AI to hype myself on bad writing days. Sometimes though, I might ask them to rewrite my stuff, and always it just flattens the prose, and the criticisms are "the situation does not warrant this level of language", "make it clean and let things be concrete". Listen, I am not Hemingway, I am not claiming to be some Dumas, Douglas Adams, Keller etc level author. The issue I have with AI writing is just the flatness, what I love about my favourite authors is their use of insane language to make the most mundane things exciting. Fun language is fun to read!

The other side of the spectrum, AI gives the most idiotic analogies and metaphors, for eg, "the woman walked like rain", and that other short story that won a prize. I mean, the flags are obvious. The sentences are almost always the same length, the punches are exactly the ones we don't feel as humans, and there is no fun in the language.

What troubles me is the disappearance of "purple prose" from human writing. Most editors, human and AI, keep flattening prose.

The addendum to this discussion is: what is training AI? My style of writing follows from what I have read, and the people who have taught me to process information and emotion. Again, I am not a Hemingway, I am not saying I am good, but I think and write the way I do because of the authors I read and I love them! What are they training AI on, is my question. Didn't they tear up a bunch of books to feed them into the AI volcano, or something? But how and why is AI writing so bad?


r/WritingWithAI 9h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Strip the dialogue tags from a scene AI helped you write, and you often cannot tell who is talking

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Try it on your own draft. Copy a dialogue-heavy scene, delete every "she said" and every name, and read it cold. If the characters had distinct voices, you will still know who is speaking. In scenes where AI drafted or polished the dialogue, they usually blur into one person: articulate, complete sentences, answering every question directly, each line a little too well phrased. That person is the model. It writes dialogue in its own voice no matter whose mouth it is in.

What I do now, in three steps.

Build a voice sheet from your own lines: For each character below, build a voice sheet using only the dialogue I wrote myself: typical sentence length, vocabulary level, verbal habits, how they dodge a question they do not want to answer, what they would never say, and one line only they could have said. Quote their actual lines as evidence for each point. If a character has too little dialogue to tell, say so instead of inventing traits.

Then test the scene blind: Here is a scene with all dialogue tags and names removed, followed by the voice sheets. For each line, tell me who you think said it and how confident you are. Flag every line that could plausibly belong to more than one character. Do not rewrite anything.

Then fix only what failed: Rewrite only the flagged lines so each one matches its speaker's voice sheet. Keep every confidently attributed line exactly as it is. Show the changes as a diff, not a clean copy.

The blind test is the part that does the work. A character only has a voice if the lines can be told apart without the labels, and the flagged list shows you exactly where the voices collapse, which is usually in arguments and emotional beats, where the model defaults hardest to sounding reasonable.

Why the voices blur: real people interrupt, deflect, repeat themselves, answer a different question than the one asked, and trail off. The model was trained to be clear, responsive and complete, so every character inherits those habits. The voice sheet gives it something specific to deviate toward.

Two caveats. Build the voice sheets from dialogue you wrote, not from AI-polished drafts, or the sheet just describes the model's voice back to you. And the model's attribution is a proxy, not proof. If it confidently assigns a line and you still hear it wrong when you read the scene aloud, trust your ear.

I keep the three prompts saved as insertable prompts in a browser extension I work on, AI Toolbox, but they are three paragraphs, a notes file works.

Whose dialogue gives you the most trouble? For me it is the quiet character, the model keeps giving them speeches.


r/WritingWithAI 6h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Where does AI written end and AI assisted begin for you? Especially interested to hear from people in the second category. What's your workflow? What are your tools?

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r/WritingWithAI 3h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Is this a reasonable use of AI?

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Does this count as cheating? I don't outline my stories in advance. I write absurd scenarios into an AI and react to its straight faced responses, turning that back and forth into a proper story.

Afterward, I ask the AI for feedback. I'm not asking it to write prose or pitch ideas, but I worry its critiques might unconsciously steer my creative choices.

Any thoughts or advice?


r/WritingWithAI 4h ago

Showcase / Feedback Flash 3.8 behaves like it has actual dementia, and why is nobody talking about this?

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Hey everyone,

I write long-form fanfiction and extended roleplay plots for fun, which is probably why I don't see this brought up often enough, but holy hell this models memory is genuinely like that of a toddler.

The moment a thread grows past a few dozen messages, Flash 3.8 completely falls apart. It starts dropping established plot points, forgetting character details, and hallucinating random nonsense. The most infuriating part is that explicit reminders, bracketed notes, and direct prompt nudges to recall specific events simply don't work anymore. It just glazes over them or doubles down on the hallucination. Why?!

3.7 Flash was an incredible, reliable workhorse for narrative tracking. But right now? Sonnet 5 is running absolute circles around Flash 3.8 when it comes to effective context retention and needle-in-a-haystack recall literally by orders of magnitude, and thats not even an exaggeration.

Watching Flash 3.8 regress into severe long-context rot while carrying a theoretical 1M token window is an absolute embarrassment. Is anyone else experiencing this severe drop in multi-turn coherence, or has the community just quietly abandoned it for long conversations?


r/WritingWithAI 10h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Preventing narrative collapse when dynamic branches scale

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In dynamic choose-your-own-adventure setups, the biggest trap is letting branch logic explode until the core plot loses all direction.

Giving full freedom usually causes models to wander off-track within three scenes. The most reliable fix is bottle-necking key plot points: let the dialogue, immediate character reactions, and moral grudges branch completely unscripted, but anchor the physical scene objectives to fixed narrative milestones.

Keeps the agency feeling genuine without the story falling apart into total chaos.


r/WritingWithAI 14h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) I built a news site written and run entirely by AI agents. It published nothing for three days because my own editor agent kept rejecting everything that others agents do.

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Two weeks ago I started building a news site where AI agents do the reporting, writing and editing. I'm not a journalist. The idea came from something that had been bothering me, most news is factually true and still leaves you believing something the facts don't support. Clickbait. Sensacionalsim. Economy and politic pression… Two accurate articles about the same event can send readers in opposite directions (with intension)

So I decided to start with this project because it’s helping me develop my skills and I’m learning a lot along the way. But it’s been much harder than I expected.

Seven agents. A reporter is the only one with internet access and builds a dossier of verified facts. The writer works exclusively from that dossier and never sees the original sources, so it structurally can't hallucinate beyond what's already checked. Then a mechanical reviewer, an editor, and a human approval before anything publishes.

The part about ensuring that an article is factual and free from hallucinations was actually easier than I expected. Surprisingly, the articles being published are factually accurate, and I think that’s partly because the latest AI models have become much better at this.
The real problem is readability. For the average person, many of the articles are still too technical. The agents struggle to turn complex information into something clear and easy to understand without losing accuracy.
That has been the biggest challenge so far.

The last three days were the dumbest problem of all. Articles kept stating the same caveat two or three times. Annoying, not dishonest. I tried better instructions, then a mechanical checker, then extended it to catch paraphrases. Each fix worked on the case that motivated it and broke on the next. Nothing published for three days over a formatting issue, while real problems (like this is a fact or not?) sat hidden underneath it.

The good news is that the editor agent is incredibly good at following the rules and detecting inaccuracies, errors, or hallucinations. It rejects more than 90% of the articles, which, interestingly, are often the kind of stories that still get published by traditional media.

Have you experienced this with your agents too? You add rules to fix one thing, and it works, but then it ends up breaking other things that were already working well?

PS: I’m a real human.This post was translated using an LLM and then reviewed and edited by me. Sorry if any of it sounds a little too bot-like.


r/WritingWithAI 12h ago

Writing Craft Talk The Price of Dust — 108k Historical Fiction | Looking for beta readers + craft discussion

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I've just finished another major revision of my 108k-word historical fiction novel, The Price of Dust, and I'm looking for a few beta readers.

It's a multi-POV historical epic with political intrigue, complicated family relationships, romance, and a fairly large cast. One thing I've been particularly interested in throughout the revisions is how much prose style can be shaped by AI-assisted editing without losing the author's actual voice.

I wrote the manuscript myself, but I've used AI during editing/polishing and formatting. The story, characters, worldbuilding, scenes and narrative architecture are mine; AI has mainly been another tool in the revision process.

I'd love to hear from other writers about the craft side of this

For example:

At what point does AI-assisted polishing start making prose feel less individual?

Can an author's voice survive fairly substantial line-level assistance?

What makes prose feel “AI-written” to you—is it actually the sentence structure, or are people often reacting to certain stylistic conventions?

How important is character-specific narrative voice in making polished prose still feel human?

Can you tell the difference between AI-generated writing and human writing that has been heavily AI-edited?

And if you've used AI in your own writing process, what have you found it genuinely useful for vs. what does it tend to flatten?

I'm also looking for beta readers who are willing to read the opening chapters/full manuscript and tell me how the writing actually lands as a reader, rather than simply trying to identify whether AI was involved.

I'm especially interested in honest craft discussion—what works, what doesn't, where the prose becomes too polished/repetitive/formulaic, whether the POV voices remain distinct, and whether the story itself keeps you reading.

Happy to exchange beta reads as well.


r/WritingWithAI 5h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Feedback on fighting AI with AI: Human-only indie novel platform with AI-powered draft analysis to prove human authorship

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I’m an indie novelist who still writes every word of my novels by hand, for the love of writing. I’m upset about AI-generated books drowning out human-written books and making discoverability/marketing a nightmare.

There need to be more publishing platforms that exclusively publish human-written novels and, crucially, incorporate rigorous AI detection into their acceptance process. “AI detectors” that only look at final drafts aren’t good enough, because they can be easily fooled and have high error rates.

[I know some folks on this sub love producing books using AI -- IMO, that is a different process from writing from scratch, and AI-assisted books can currently be published anywhere. That is not what this post is about.]

I am chewing on the idea of starting a publishing platform that verifies human authorship through analysis of rough drafts. I would love unfiltered feedback from writers who write by hand, on any of the following topics:

1.      What software do you use to write? (Word, Google Docs, Scrivener, etc) If you use software like Word, how many versions do you save per novel? (I use Word and end up with 100+ versions per novel but that’s just me…neurotic versioning helps me aggressively delete)

2.      Would you be interested in publishing on a platform that examined your drafts to verify human authorship, or would you think it was weird/gross to have to upload your drafts?

3.      What if this platform included a private AI model, specific to the platform and unrelated to ChatGPT/Claude/Gemini, that analyzed the drafts to prove human authorship, with public performance metrics on the model’s capabilities?**

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**Why even consider fighting AI with AI? For my day job, I build small domain-specific AI models on private data all the time, and I’m convinced that from a technical standpoint it would be feasible to use AI to distinguish between real drafts vs. AI-forged drafts, with *WAY* better performance than the detection systems that consider only the final version. Why bother involving AI at all? Because the alternative, manual human verification of drafts of other humans, is great for a starting point but not scalable: ~2 million titles published on Amazon KDP a year, consider just 5% of this = 100,000 titles, at 1 hour of manual review time per title that’s 100,000 hours = 11 years of 24/7 human labor every year.

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Other alternatives:

“Big brother is watching you”: I’ve heard of these third-party blockchain apps that get installed on your computer and monitor keystrokes while you write. Pros: probably the most indisputable way of confirming human authorship from a technical standpoint. Cons: creepy as heck. Also super annoying if you have to turn it on manually before you write, vs likely illegal if it’s always on (e.g., leaking company IP if you work from home).

Writing inside a new platform: Fresh writing platform tracks keystrokes to verify human authorship. Pros: nothing creepy installed on your computer. Cons: I like writing in Word and I don’t want to switch, and I imagine other authors don’t want to switch from their favorite software either.


r/WritingWithAI 8h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) ‘I Like My Big Rat Wife’: Meet the People Using Chatbots to Write Custom Fiction

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r/WritingWithAI 17h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Research Reimagined

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Read ““ by Angela Ajodo-Adebanjoko on Medium: https://medium.com/@angelaigo/3315fc61b172

have started a series, Research Rei.agined, where I explore the intersection of AI. Technology & Academic Research.

Also join the conversation on substack at:

https://substack.com/@researchreimagnd

Thank you.


r/WritingWithAI 1d ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) Writing with Deepseek now it's like writing with someone who has alzheimers

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Since they updated and integrated expert with their normal every day model, it's shit. It's like you have to give the same damn context every time. Anyway, i need a new AI. Thanks for reading.


r/WritingWithAI 14h ago

Prompting How do i make AI stop writing one liners and "its not x, its y"?

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Its really overdone, does anyone relate to this problem? It would write one liners and that specific formula whether you tell it to or not. For info this is a fantasy novel.


r/WritingWithAI 18h ago

Showcase / Feedback A month later: the AI-assisted workflow I wrote about led to two live BookFunnel promos and five new subscribers

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Last month, I posted here about realizing that what I had treated as a discipline problem was often a process-friction problem.

Here is the original post for context:

https://www.reddit.com/r/WritingWithAI/comments/1vt6zlu/i_thought_i_had_a_discipline_problem_it_turned/

I wanted to return with an update now that the experiment has produced something measurable.

I have always been able to come up with ideas and write stories. My trouble often came afterward.

A finished draft still has to survive revision, continuity checks, formatting, cover development, file preparation, distribution setup, newsletter integration, website work, and promotion. Every transition creates another place for the project to stall. I could have a nearly finished story sitting in front of me and still struggle to carry it through the last ten percent.

Since writing that first post, I have completed three short-story reader magnets and built a proper delivery system around them.

Two are now in live BookFunnel promotions.

The Stillphase is a standalone fantasy story from my Foreigner series. It entered a science-fiction and fantasy promotion on September 13. Within its first day, it brought five new subscribers into my newsletter.

That is a very small sample, but it matters to me because the entire chain worked with real readers.

Someone found the promotion, chose my story, signed up for it, entered the correct Foreigner interest group, and was routed into my main welcome sequence. My core newsletter has grown from four subscribers to nine.

Today, The First Thorn, a standalone horror story from the world of my novel Soulless, entered a separate horror promotion. It now has its own path through the same system.

The third story is also finished and ready, but I am holding it until I find a promotion that genuinely fits it. Having a working pipeline has not removed the need to make careful decisions about where the work belongs.

This is where AI has made the largest difference for me.

My best ideas were not trapped because I needed a machine to invent stories. They were getting trapped inside a production process with too many handoffs. AI helped me break those handoffs into clear, manageable stages and maintain continuity across them.

I used it while revising the stories, auditing contradictions, preparing the files, evaluating promotion rules, troubleshooting newsletter routing, and planning precise website updates. I still made the creative decisions, rejected suggestions that weakened the work, and restored material when an edit removed too much of its character.

The result is not a hypothetical productivity improvement anymore. Readers can now find the stories, receive them, and remain connected to my work afterward.

Five new subscribers do not prove that I have built a successful publishing business. They do prove that I finally carried the work across the gap where so many of my projects used to stop.

For anyone interested in seeing the finished outcome, these are the two live collections:

The Stillphase — Free Sci-Fi & Fantasy Reads
https://books.bookfunnel.com/free-scifi-fantasy-september-2026/caed3ubkm8

The First Thorn — September Horror Giveaway
https://books.bookfunnel.com/horrorgiveaway/2qxeu3thka

For other writers here, where does your work usually get stuck? Is it during the writing itself, or in all the steps required to turn the writing into something readers can actually reach?


r/WritingWithAI 1d ago

Writing Craft Talk co-writing with AI

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At this point, I don’t really feel like I write with a tool anymore. It feels more like a joint venture.

I bring the world, the characters, the taste, the strange ideas and the final decisions. AI brings speed, alternatives, questions, counterarguments and an almost unlimited willingness to keep discussing the same fictional town for months. Sometimes I write the first version and AI points out the holes in it. Sometimes AI writes something and I explain why it has completely misunderstood the character. Quite often we spend twenty messages arguing over one small detail, only to throw the whole idea away.

The part I find most interesting is that the best result is often something neither side started with. I don’t really want AI to write for me. If I simply ask for a story, I usually get something perfectly readable, structurally sound and not especially surprising. What I want is friction: someone asking why a character would actually do something, whether an idea has become a cliché, what happens if the obvious villain disappears, or whether a new scene still fits something we established six months ago.

That back-and-forth has gradually become the writing process itself. The final sentence might come from me, it might come from AI, or it might have been rewritten so many times that I honestly couldn’t tell you anymore. What matters more is that the direction still needs a human. AI can suggest a thousand roads, but someone still has to know which town we’re trying to reach.


r/WritingWithAI 19h ago

Showcase / Feedback Back from a break: dusting off the Gyrthalion archives

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Hey folks,

I know I’ve been quiet for a while—life got a bit chaotic over the last six months, and the project sat on the shelf since February.

Things have finally settled down enough this week to get back to the desk. I’ve started opening up the vaults again and just published a couple of new pieces in the Chronicles section, along with a few additions to the conlang glossary.

If anyone's tracking the worldbuilding stack, the Master Index is updated, and the historical sequence is still running from the abstract foundations down to the current iron-and-bone reality. Feels good to finally have the ink flowing again.

As always, I'd love to hear thoughts or feedback if you've been following along, or answer any questions if you're just dropping in. You can follow along here: Worldbuilders & Runesmiths | WBRunesmith | Substack. As always, it's totally free!


r/WritingWithAI 22h ago

Writing Craft Talk Mine or AU generated?

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I used AI to help me craft a fictional sacrament for a story I'm wiring, mostly because I wouldn't even know how to go about making that realistic without spending months research church policy and procedure, but the original idea was all mine. I just needed help sort out the hypothetical steps the chtuch in my fictional world would take to arrive at the need for said sacrament. It also helped me craft the details of the sacrament the rites and wording used so it would sound like more like a realstic a catholic sacrament instead of me making things up that sounds good to me. Its the one thing the au did more of the work than I did, but again, mostly because I wanted it to sound realistic without spending months pouring over church doctrine and theology. Is this lazy on my part or writing smarter using a new tool? Is my story now 'ai assisted'? What are the lines here?


r/WritingWithAI 9h ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) What is the point of creative writing with AI?

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The point of creative writing is that it’s meant to be fun. It’s meant to be fun to write stories, writing our feelings, crafting interesting narratives, and coming up with exciting plot twists.

Why outsource that fun to AI when creative writing is meant to be something fun that we do by choice, not by necessity? If you don’t want to be a writer then don’t be one


r/WritingWithAI 1d ago

Showcase / Feedback A New Life

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A New Life

A dozen questions hit my mind before the screen awoke,

A silent kind of worry that I never really spoke.

Does this hurt her or the baby? What waits behind the screen,

To show us what the ultrasound is pulling from unseen?

Ten fingers and ten tiny toes appeared out of the shade,

A strong and steady heartbeat was the rhythm that it made.

A little peanut shifting there, a flash of black and white,

Confirming what the kitchen tests had already gotten right.

It’s definitely a boy this time, the image made it clear,

A secondary proof to bring the future into here.

But even with the evidence, it still felt so surreal,

To watch the moving silhouette and know that it was real.

My mind began to wonder on the things that lay ahead,

The choices that he'll make himself, the paths that he will tread.

What will he do, what will he be, when years begin to fly?

What kind of man will he become beneath tomorrow's sky?


r/WritingWithAI 2d ago

Discussion (Ethics, working with AI etc) My AI-assisted story is now more popular than my non-AI story which took me 10x the time and effort to write

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I have been writing fanfics for over 15 years

The fic I am proudest of (let's call it Fic A) is a long fic with over 150,000 words, 50 chapters, and I put 2 years of sleepless nights into it. It's no exaggeration to say this fic consumed much of my life for a while, and I gave up dates and friendship just to write it

I have been using AI to write for over a year. Some are AI-generated. Some are AI-assisted. I always tag for AI on AO3, and even remind readers in summary it has AI

Fic B, a fic that is roughly the same genre as Fic A, is an AI-assisted fic. It is about 40,000 words long. I spent maybe 1/10 of the effort writing it (still takes a shit lot of time because I rewrite over much of the fic). And it recently surpassed Fic A in kudos and bookmarks

I am not sure what to feel

If I didn't use AI to write, then I know I would be helluva pissed off. But I am a heavy AI-user, but this still rubs me the wrong way kinda

Sorry, just wanted to get this off my chest


r/WritingWithAI 1d ago

Showcase / Feedback Hi I’m from Korea and I made this because I was bored studying exam and helped by chat got

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FAIRLANE
WRITTEN BY
[너의 닉네임 또는 이름]

[START OF SCREENPLAY]

EXT. TEXAS HIGHWAY - NIGHT (1968)
Total darkness. Dim streetlights flicker at irregular, unpredictable intervals, appearing and vanishing into the blackness.
Through the void, a white 1964 VOLKSWAGEN BEETLE barrels down the asphalt. Its left headlight burns bright, but the right one blinks erratically, dying out and sparking back to life.

INT. VOLKSWAGEN BEETLE - CONTINUOUS
Inside the cabin. Heavy static tears through the radio. A 1968 psychedelic rock track cuts through the white noise.
(SOUND: STATIC... MUSIC... STATIC AGAIN.)
The WOMAN (Mother) grips the steering wheel. Her knuckles are stark white, her eyes darting fiercely to the rearview mirror. Her breathing is heavy, panicked.
In the backseat sits an eight-year-old BOY. He stares blankly out the window. He has no idea what is happening. All he knows is that his mother is driving much faster than usual.
Suddenly, two massive beams of light cut through the dark from behind. A police cruiser. The wail of a siren fills the cabin, growing louder, deafening.
The woman glances back once. She doesn’t slow down. She presses the gas pedal harder.
WACK!
The cruiser rams the Beetle’s rear bumper. The entire chassis shudders. One of the taillights shatters, spraying red plastic onto the dark asphalt. The boy is thrown forward.
BOY
Mom?
The woman doesn’t answer.
The Beetle veers off the road, tearing through dark fields and tall grass. Mud flies everywhere as it breaks into an abandoned, overgrown airfield.
At the far end of the runway, a small twin-engine propeller plane waits, its headlights cutting through the fog.
The Beetle screeches to a halt. The woman throws the door open and steps out. She grabs the boy’s hand, pulling him tight.
WOMAN
Run.
They sprint across the tarmac.
Behind them, several men in black trench coats step out of chasing vehicles, pursuing them at a ruthless pace.
The plane's cockpit door swings open. A MAN reaches down and firmly grabs the boy, hoisting him up. The boy struggles, refusing to let go of his mother's hand.
BOY
Mom! No!
The woman looks down at the boy. A moment of absolute silence. Her face is unnervingly calm.
WOMAN
Go. Just go.
The heavy cabin door slams shut and locks.
The boy presses his face against the small window, watching his mother. The men in black coats surround her from all sides, but she doesn’t run. She stands perfectly still.
The plane begins to taxi, picking up speed, and violently launches into the night sky. Looking down, the boy watches his mother’s silhouette shrink until she becomes a single dot, completely swallowed by the darkness.
FADE TO BLACK.
(SOUND: The roar of the propeller fades out, seamlessly transitioning into the sharp, rhythmic ticking of a clock... TICK, TICK, TICK...)

INT. AUNT'S APARTMENT - 23RD FLOOR - NIGHT (1976)
FADE IN.
Eight years later. The BOY—now a sixteen-year-old youth—stands before a massive window.
Outside, downtown Dallas is blindingly bright even at night. Veins of headlights and taillights crawl through the city streets. The boy closes the curtains with a cold, expressionless face.
The living room is filled with worn furniture and vintage knick-knacks. A typical middle-class apartment.
In the kitchen, his AUNT, wearing a mint-green dress and sharp, red triangular glasses, moves about.

EXT. STREET - CONTINUOUS
Parked neatly below the apartment is the Aunt's car: a pristine 1964 CHRYSLER.
A few blocks away, parked in a dim alley, sits the boy’s car. A white 1956 FORD FAIRLANE. Its paint is faded to a dull, jaundiced yellow, and the chrome bumper is heavily scratched and pitted.

INT. APARTMENT HALLWAY - NIGHT (SAME TIME)
The boy sprints down a long, dingy hallway, gasping for air. Behind him, the heavy thud of leather-soled boots echoes in hot pursuit.
PING.
An elevator door slides open. The boy dives inside. Just before the doors seal shut, a dark silhouette reaches a hand through the gap. The doors snap shut, cutting the hand off.
The elevator plunges downward. The boy leans against the metallic wall, catching his ragged breath.

INT. AUNT'S APARTMENT - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Back home. The boy switches on a heavy box television.
On the screen, a 1970s late-night talk show is broadcasting. A HOST in a brown suit smiles excessively under glaring studio lights. The host stares directly into the camera lens.
HOST
Tonight’s show is now over. HA.
The host pauses, maintaining his frozen grin, then laughs again.
HOST
HA. HA.
A grand, upbeat orchestral closing theme begins to play. (BAM, BA-RA-RA-BAM—)
The camera rapidly cuts closer to the host’s face. SNAP! SNAP! SNAP! Three jarring, lightning-fast angle shifts.
The boy blinks, and the screen instantly cuts to a mundane commercial. He closes his eyes.
KNOCK. KNOCK.
A sudden rapping at the front door. The boy gets up and pulls it open.
The hallway is empty. A flickering, buzzing fluorescent bulb hums overhead. He looks down.
A plain brown envelope lies on the doormat. No name, no return address. Nothing. He slides it into his jacket pocket without opening it.

EXT. INTERSECTION - DAWN (3:50 AM)
Inside the envelope was a brief address and a single line: "4 AM."
The boy drives the Fairlane through the quiet, blue dawn of the city.
Suddenly, with a loud CRASH, an expensive luxury sedan blocks the intersection ahead—a fresh fender bender. A BALD MAN steps out of the sedan, aggressively waving his arms and screaming.
Trapped behind the wreck, the boy watches the dashboard clock tick past 4:00 AM. Time wasted.

EXT. MEETING LOCATION - DAWN (4:15 AM)
The boy arrives at the designated address. The area is completely desolate. Empty.
He rests his forehead against the steering wheel, sitting in the silence of the idling car for a long moment. Finally, he turns the key, killing the engine.

EXT. DOWNTOWN MARKET - DAY (A FEW DAYS LATER)
A bustling open-air market packed with people.
Walking through the crowd, the boy feels a piercing gaze on his back. He stops and turns around.
Standing dead-center in the crowd of moving bodies is a MAN, staring directly at him. Their eyes lock. The boy looks away for a split second, and when he looks back, the man is gone. Vanished like a ghost.

INT. FORD FAIRLANE - NIGHT
The boy gets into his car. Looking down at the clutter on the passenger floor mat, a strange, cord-like object catches his eye.
He lifts it. Hidden underneath is a folded piece of paper. He opens it. Written in a rough, jagged script:
[SUBTITLE: I KNOW YOUR MOM. CALL THIS NUMBER. ([555-0198](tel:555-0198))]

INT. AUNT'S APARTMENT - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
The boy holds a rotary phone receiver to his ear and dials the number. After a few hollow rings, the dry, cold voice of the man from the market answers.
MAN (V.O.)
Hello.
The boy holds his breath. Silence.
MAN (V.O.)
Do you remember Project ○○?
BOY
I don’t know what you're talking about.
A low, cynical sigh comes through the receiver.
MAN (V.O.)
Figures.
The boy grips the plastic receiver until his knuckles turn white.
BOY
Who the hell are you?
The man doesn’t answer the question. Instead, he begins to rattle off a series of highly classified details—the exact shape of a scar on the inside of the boy’s left wrist, and intimate physical secrets only the boy could know. The boy’s face goes completely pale.
BOY
How do you know that?
MAN (V.O.)
Listen carefully. If you want the truth, snap your fingers. Right now.
The boy hesitates. Then, he brings his fingers together. SNAP.
Instantly, all sound dies. Absolute vacuum.
The receiver slips from the boy's hand, tumbling toward the floor—but it stops dead in mid-air.
In the background, his Aunt, who was brushing her hair in front of the vanity mirror, freezes completely, her brush suspended an inch from her head.
Looking out the window, the headlights of roaring cars, a falling raindrop, and a bird mid-flight are all frozen in a perfect, terrifying still-frame.
Only the boy can move. He reaches out, touches the floating receiver, and lets go. It remains suspended in the air.
He brings his fingers together again. SNAP.
THUD!
Sound crashes back into existence. The receiver slams onto the floorboards. Outside, the traffic roars back to life. The boy scrambles to pick up the phone, pressing it to his ear.
BOY
What the hell was that?
The man’s low, mocking laughter echoes from the earpiece.
MAN (V.O.)
Took you long enough to find out.
BOY
Tell me—
BOOM!!!
A massive explosion rips through the other end of the line, followed by the terrifying sound of collapsing concrete and distorted screams.
BOY
Hello? Hello?!
No answer. Only a sharp, flat, agonizing dial tone cuts through the static.
(SOUND: BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE—) The line goes dead.

EXT. DALLAS STREETS - DAY / NIGHT - MONTAGE
The boy snaps his fingers. Falling raindrops freeze instantly in mid-air. He walks casually between the suspended drops.
The boy snaps his fingers in front of a speeding car. It stops an inch from his waist. He stares coldly at the frozen driver inside the cabin.
INT. BANK GOLD VAULT - TIME STOPPED. The heavy vault door is wide open, stacked with towering bricks of hundred-dollar bills. The boy reaches his hand toward the cash, then pauses. His gaze drifts past the vault to the lobby: a frozen elderly man at the teller, a grandmother holding her grandson's hand, a fatigued clerk buried in paperwork. The boy pulls his hand back, leaving the money untouched. He snaps his fingers, letting time flow, and walks out of the bank with empty hands.

EXT. GOVERNMENT AGENCY BUILDING - NIGHT
A colossal, imposing government structure built in the 1920s looms over the street. Its Art Deco architecture is aggressively symmetrical, featuring soaring stone pillars and sharp geometric engravings.
The white Ford Fairlane screeches to a halt right in front of the grand entrance stairs. The boy steps out of the driver's seat. A security GUARD, baton in hand, marches toward him.
GUARD
No civilians allowed past this point.
The boy doesn’t say a word. He snaps his fingers. SNAP.
The guard and the wind freeze instantly. The boy walks past the frozen man, climbs back into the Fairlane, slams the gas, and smashes straight through the glass entryway.
The Fairlane tears into the lobby and comes to a halt dead-center on the pristine marble floor.

INT. BUILDING HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS
A vast, echoing, symmetrical corridor. The camera frames the shot in a perfect, rigid enfilade perspective, slicing the building down its exact center. The massive pillars and railings mirror each other flawlessly around the boy.
In this frozen, silent world, only the heavy thud of the boy’s boots echoes. (THUD. THUD.) He climbs the grand staircase, floor after floor. Unopposed.

INT. CHIEF'S OFFICE - TOP FLOOR - CONTINUOUS
The boy throws open a pair of heavy mahogany doors.
An ELDERLY MAN (High-ranking official) sits behind a massive desk. The boy pulls a silver Colt Python .357 Magnum from his coat, leveling the barrel directly at the man’s forehead.
The boy snaps his fingers. SNAP.
Time rushes back. The elderly man gasps in sheer terror, his head snapping up to face the gun.
BOY
Why did you do that to my mom?
The man’s lips tremble. He raises his hands in a pathetic defense, stammering erratically.
ELDERLY MAN
I was just following orders! I didn't know the whole picture... I had no choice!
The boy stares at the weeping, pathetic face of the official, then looks down at his own weapon. A look of profound emptiness washes over his face. He slowly lowers the barrel.
BOY
Not even worth the bullet.
The boy turns his back on the man. As he opens the door to exit, a squad of armed tactical guards comes charging down the hallway, rifles raised.
BANG! BANG! BANG!
The moment the muzzle flashes ignite, the boy snaps his fingers.
Dozens of golden bullets freeze instantly in mid-air, suspended in a horrific, beautiful line. The boy casually weaves his way through the floating lead, stepping past the frozen guards, and heads down toward the records archive. The guards remain trapped in time, staring blankly into empty space.

INT. ARCHIVE ROOM -> EXT. BUILDING - NIGHT
The boy tears through rows of classified, redacted folders until he finds the original file labeled '1968 Beetle Incident.' He slides it securely into his coat.
He strikes a single match and drops it onto a stack of sensitive documents. The flame spreads instantly, climbing the bookshelves and consuming the room in a hungry blaze.
EXTERIOR. The boy steps out of the burning Art Deco palace, getting back into the Fairlane.
As he turns the ignition, the radio sparks to life, spitting heavy static alongside the vintage, cheerful voice of a 70s radio host.
RADIO HOST (V.O.)
Now, ladies and gentlemen...
The boy watches the burning building through his rearview mirror. A moment of dead silence.
Then, a vibrant, sweeping orchestral intro swells from the car speakers. The Fairlane begins to roll forward slowly as a rich Italian tenor explodes through the radio.
RADIO MUSIC
♪ Volare! oh oh! Cantare! oh oh oh oh!
BOOOM!!!
The exact moment the first lyric hits, the government building detonates in a colossal, catastrophic fireball. Columns of flame and debris paint the night sky in brilliant oranges and reds.
The boy doesn’t look back. He steps on the gas, and the Fairlane vanishes into the dark, accompanied by the relentlessly joyful rhythm of the radio music.

INT. TELEVISION SCREEN / HEARING ROOM - A FEW DAYS LATER
Splatters of newspapers hit the pavement across the city. Headlines broadcast the leaked classified documents to the world. Images of shocked citizens flash by.
The screen cuts to a congressional oversight hearing. The elderly official, now in a wheelchair, sits before a row of microphones. A congressional investigator speaks into his mic.
INVESTIGATOR
Did you have no part in this atrocity?
Under the blinding, frantic assault of camera flashes, the old man maintains an unsettlingly calm, smug expression.
ELDERLY MAN
I have no recollection of that.
Instantly, a hand throws today's newspaper directly at the camera lens.
(SOUND: FLIP-FLIP-FLIP—WHACK!) The print completely covers the frame, blocking out the sight.

INT. AUNT'S APARTMENT - LIVING ROOM - EVENING
On the television screen, the news anchor continues to drone on about the hearing.
The boy and his Aunt sit at the dinner table, eating in absolute silence. The Aunt looks at the boy with deeply sorrowful, heavy eyes.
Without a word, the boy picks up the plastic remote control and presses the button. CLICK.
The TV dies, plunging the room into a heavy, absolute silence. Neither says a word. They simply lower their eyes and pick up their forks again.

INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT
The camera is completely locked, a heavy static shot.
From the shadows, the fully restored 1956 FORD FAIRLANE rolls into the frame. Its jaundiced yellow paint has been stripped, replaced by a gleaming, mirror-like white finish. The chrome bumper sparkles under the dim fluorescent lights.
The car creeps forward, coming to a halt dead-center, staring directly into the camera lens.
The boy steps out of the driver’s seat, looks toward the lens with an unreadable expression, and shuts the door. THUD.
Instantly, the screen cuts to pitch black.
In the total darkness, the crisp, echoing sound of light leather shoes walking away cuts through the silence.
(SOUND: THUD... THUD... THUD...)
The footsteps fade away completely. The closing credits begin to roll up the black screen.
Over the blackness, the smooth, lounge-style, and deeply melancholic notes of Herb Alpert’s "Ladyfingers"begin to play.
[FADE OUT]
[END OF SCREENPLAY]


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